Thursday, 13 February 2014

U1A2ASS1

If I were to write a poem about my life, two themes that I could portray would be laughter and freedom.  I chose these themes because when you meet me you will quickly learn that I laugh a lot. Sometimes maybe a little bit too much and maybe at the wrong time. I laugh at stupid jokes and even serious things I try to always find the positive and find something to laugh at. I also chose freedom because my parents trust me a lot and allow me to do lots of things on my own.

I chose this poem because I feel the first part shows freedom, that they loose track of time because they aren't worried about it and it also talks about laughter too and how laughter will help you.

Summer Cycle

The sun it kiss my cheek yeah that feels fine
the breeze it strokes my feet that feels fine
losing the track of the time
confused in a sun covered time

birdsong is all i hear while i am hear
im lost but cannot see these things i feel
circles appear in my mind
floating through space and through time

you might feel laughter in the sun
but laughter might help us when were done
you might feel laughter in the sun
but laughter might help us when were done



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